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A recon into Angeles National Forest
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What's the story here? Adding titles and some narration that tells us what the story is will really help focus your piece. Remember to keep the camera still (esp. for the Grauman's Chinese theatre stuff at the beginning). Right now the visuals are compelling, but it feels like one long, random series of shots that don't quite relate to each other. Looking forward to your next effort!