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Johnny Berg - Break the Ice

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Emanon

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Date & Time 11 February 2011, 6:46 pm

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I shot this on my Lumix Gh1 which I recently purchased to pursue my passion in cinematography. Lumix Gh1 Canon FD 50mm f1.8 S.C. m43-FD adapter Sony Vegas 10

Tags: lumix gh1 skate boarding skateboarding canon 50mm emanon entertainment

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lisa Mar 13, 2011, 05:43pm

I think you're at the beginning of something cool here Emanon but it needs work. The opening graphic is great but it's up way too long. Viewers don't hang around so cut to your opening shot about 3" sooner. I understand this is your artistic vision but I presume you want people to watch your videos otherwise why else would you make them so I think you have to lose the opening shot because as beautiful as it is and as much as it relates to the title of the film it has absolutely nothing to do with what the video is about. One of your best shots is the close-up at 01':25" and also at 00:23"; Djgregallen is right you need lots more shots like this then you wouldn't need to dip to black each time you cut from a wide to a wide. With so many long wide shots it's very difficult to up the pacing of this video but if you had shot more sequences and in particular more close-ups you'd be able to cut it to a much faster music track and it would be interesting to see the results.

Comments

Martell
6:03 pm Thursday
Feb 24, 2011

Have a look at one of my films leave a comment and a rating thanks This is the link: http://www.nyvs.com/user/Martell/watch/video/scarlet-violet-flower-shop

Martell
6:03 pm Thursday
Feb 24, 2011

Good video, Loved the slow-motion shots. Some narration would have been cool. But its still al good

roninthecode
4:51 am Saturday
Feb 12, 2011

the footage is great and the subject plays some cool tricks, there is however not a lot of story to relate to. If you would have the subject doing some soundbites or doing a short interview at the beginning or the end it would engage the viewer much more. now they are just some cool images, and they question for the viewer remains: who is this guy what or why is he there fore. If you as a filmer are able to make a emotional connection with the viewer this clip would change from great footage to a great clip. 1 :

Emanon
12:03 am Saturday
Feb 12, 2011

Wow someone commented on it! I actually didnt have hope for this site at first. Thanks for the info! I would get closer, i just wish i had more than my 50mm..It being on a lumix with an adapter it crops more, i'd love a fisheye..I need to learn to actually shoot just the board sometimes..

djgregallen
8:57 pm Friday
Feb 11, 2011

You did great wit lens, but the camera is lacking....LOL. Just playin...I'm a canon man. Good job. I'd love to see more close ups. Don't be afraid to get too close. 2 :