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Fish in the City
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Date & Time 6 February 2011, 11:43 pm
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World class fishing documentary.
Tags: Coho salmon | Grand Rapids
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I am a avid video editor. I just want to hone my skills for better videos for film competition and church media presentations.
I am a avid video editor. I just want to hone my skills for better videos for film competition and church media presentations.Less »
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Kelly
Feb 07, 2011, 03:12pm
Hi Hammy1, Much improved with the changes at the beginning of the piece and the audio mix fixes at the 6th st dam section. Nice music choices throughout. The new sections at the end have some great information in them, and I like the way you've used text and graphics. You might want to experiment with the text animation in places. The same move feels a little repetitive after a while. At 4:27, your narration changes noticeably in quality. Small note at 6:06 it should read "Heeded" not "Headed";)
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