About this video
This is my latest directorial work and third music video.
This is very nicely shot and put together for only your third ever music video. Here are some things I think you can work on: Firstly in the shooting it seems as though a lot of the tilts you have are not very smooth, are you using a good tripod with a fluid head? Secondly if you're going to use the idea of him walking from scene to scene then you need him to leave frame more in order to create more elegance in the editing. Too often he doesn't leave frame at all. Also when you shoot you need to be aware of continuity. Sometimes the guy's shirt in partly tucked in, sometimes it's out and honestly I think this was not a great outfit for him to wear for this as you'll see it doesn't look good in a lot of the shots. With regards to the edit, I think this could be cut much better to the music track. As the viewer I feel a lot of the shots are too long and the video lacks pacing because of it.