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This Feeling by Pulse2AM

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KallimaMedia

Views 171
Date & Time 25 January 2012, 7:28 am

About this video

This is my latest directorial work and third music video.



About the Uploader
Hi, my name is Jennifer Hepler and I have recently taken my passion for making videos and created my own media company. I am still new at this and learning.. More »
Hi, my name is Jennifer Hepler and I have recently taken my passion for making videos and created my own media company. I am still new at this and learning more each day. I hope to learn a lot here at NYVS and meet some interesting people who also share my passion. Less »


NYVS Critique

lisa Jan 28, 2012, 12:18pm 1 : Helpful Not Helpful

This is very nicely shot and put together for only your third ever music video. Here are some things I think you can work on: Firstly in the shooting it seems as though a lot of the tilts you have are not very smooth, are you using a good tripod with a fluid head? Secondly if you're going to use the idea of him walking from scene to scene then you need him to leave frame more in order to create more elegance in the editing. Too often he doesn't leave frame at all. Also when you shoot you need to be aware of continuity. Sometimes the guy's shirt in partly tucked in, sometimes it's out and honestly I think this was not a great outfit for him to wear for this as you'll see it doesn't look good in a lot of the shots. With regards to the edit, I think this could be cut much better to the music track. As the viewer I feel a lot of the shots are too long and the video lacks pacing because of it.

Comments

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KallimaMedia
7:35 am Tuesday
Mar 27, 2012
@eogarcia3 Thank you! Helpful Not Helpful
eogarcia3
6:38 pm Monday
Mar 26, 2012
Good job Jennifer Helpful Not Helpful
eogarcia3
6:36 pm Monday
Mar 26, 2012
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KallimaMedia
10:31 am Tuesday
Jan 31, 2012
@MelindaMovies - the effect with the angel and the statues was done with a green screen. ;-) Helpful Not Helpful
KallimaMedia
10:30 am Tuesday
Jan 31, 2012
Thanks Joan! I agree on the closeups.. we are working that for next time.. ;-) Helpful Not Helpful
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