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http://www.venturascafe.com Ventura's Offshore Cafe 2015 Shore Rd. Northfield, NJ 08225 Video by Nick Cheadle Music by Jim Cheadle and Cheadle Brothers http://www.9southproductions.com/VideoProduction.htmlTags: venturas offshore cafe restaurant northfield nj atlantic city south jersey
You have a good story here Nick and a good character and we know audiences love videos about food and eating out. I think your biggest issue is the camera moves really detract from what would otherwise be a very professional looking product. You need to shoot sequences and believe me it will make the editing so much easier. In terms of the storytelling you need to start with your best and most interesting shot and that is definitely not the outside of the restaurant. You only have a few seconds to grab the viewer and it's 14 seconds before we even see the food. Your best shots are the close-ups in the kitchen so start there and then introduce us to Lou. I think this video would benefit from some tightening up as it feels about a minute too long. The sweet spot for online video is really one to two minutes.