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Scott Brown Profile

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adamwalbright

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Date & Time 11 June 2012, 3:30 pm

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This is a promotional video done to promote Scott's Business

Tags: Business

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NYVS Critique

debbie Jun 18, 2012, 01:15pm

Great job with shooting for this piece! Framing and color style look really nice. Your story here is pretty clear, but one thing that takes away from that story is the pacing of the edits. Don’t be so quick to cut to new shots when focus is on the voice over. Making lots of cuts on insignificant b-roll can be distracting, for example the quick cuts of food at 1:50. Another thing that can distract from your story is when the b-roll audio cuts in and out, like at 1:34. Not only is the driving shot way too quick, the sound of driving cuts in and out quickly. It may sound cliché, but less is more. Try losing some of the non-essential background audio and some of the shots showing extra angles. Good start!

Comments

adamwalbright
11:40 am Thursday
Jun 14, 2012

Thanks monkeybrush. I'll focus on better endings;-)

monkeybrush
4:50 pm Tuesday
Jun 12, 2012

Like the editing and shooting the best. The ending shot seems a bit abrupt/cut off but overall I thought it was a good little production.

adamwalbright
1:28 pm Tuesday
Jun 12, 2012

Please Critique.