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Sizzle 2

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Date & Time 27 June 2011, 3:13 am

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Sizzle reel for up coming show,wanted fast pace all feed back welcome

Tags: Cooking | Fishing

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NYVS Critique

Kelly Aug 11, 2011, 06:51pm 1 : Helpful Not Helpful

Perfect choice of music for this. The audio mix need a bit of work, particularly when your main character speaks. He has such charisma, it's a shame for it to get lock in the mix. I'd move the section with the boys on the beach to just before he serves his parents. Much improved from the last one. Good job!

Comments

chaver
1:42 pm Saturday
Feb 4, 2012
Nice Helpful Not Helpful
acollmer
4:21 pm Monday
Jun 27, 2011
I like the shooting and narrative, but the titles got me a little lost. I think it might have been the fact that "my boys" and "collect" were separated into two lines. when I saw the boys, I thought it had transitioned into a home movie of the family, rather than another avenue for procurement. Helpful Not Helpful