Nice job on the close-ups, and your narration voice is great. What would really make this piece sing is a character. Perhaps the young woman who is painting. Why is she there? What is she getting out of it? Instead of introducing York Art School right away, the piece would be much more compelling if the viewer could connect with the young woman we are seeing. Remember, characters are always more interesting that general subjects. Continue to work on keeping that camera steady! Great 1st effort.
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