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Tragedy

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Date & Time 26 June 2012, 10:17 pm

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lisa Aug 15, 2012, 04:16pm Helpful Not Helpful

You don't say what the background was to this film and it's clearly well put together but a bit heavy handed and would benefit from a little more subtlety. I suggest you take a look at the Canadian film made in 1997 called "The Sweet Hereafter" written and directed by Atom Egoyan. While not directly related to your film it will give you a sense of how to present these kinds of issues in a much more subtle and elegant way.

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benfoster
2:47 pm Friday
Jul 20, 2012
you really captured the story well.I especially like the black and white effect to indicate the past.Great job. Helpful Not Helpful