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The Gym

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crs852

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Date & Time 18 May 2012, 2:25 am

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a small community Gym is struggling to stay in business

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joshuareber
3:47 pm Sunday
Aug 12, 2012

Great video! There is a lot of great variety of shots and you have HUGE potential! Just be sure to work with your audio and put more of a story together with shots. Keep it up!

jamesERIC
7:33 pm Friday
May 18, 2012

Nice possibilities here. Interesting subject matter, some really nice shooting angles, helpful (and nearly close enough) closeups. I suspect part of the story is the loneliness of the place, which the harsh lighting emphasizes. At the same time, however, the viewer needs to see the facial expressions. Post production filtering --levels, shadow/highlight? The narrative seems appropriate, too, although the final voiceover fades noticeably. What I see here is the foundation of a worthwhile "rescue" video sort of presentation; is there a way to publish the final project, do you know, that might benefit this place? Regardless, it's interesting, tells the story effectively. Yeah, it needs a little work, but so do nearly all the videos produced here (there's always some little thing to tweak). Keep it up, post often!