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"Sizzle Reel" for fabulous 1/2 hour tv show!
NYVS Critique
Very well edited sizzle reel! Your combo of quick editing, visual effects, and music comes together to make a very grabbing piece. There are a few specific moments that could use some polishing. Have “Tim” and “Dawnie”’s titles fly in a little faster. Tim’s works as is, but Dawnie’s needs to be up a little longer to be easily read. Both should have the same movement, so bring both in quicker so the name is stopped longer, but it’s not taking up any more time in your piece. At 28 seconds Dawnie doesn’t finish her tomato statement. Quick bites are good, but it needs to be a complete thought. At 36 seconds, Tim repeats his organic statement. This piece is short, so it really shouldn’t contain noticeable repeats of b-roll or audio. At 1 minute the word “complicated” is on top of the b-roll audio saying “Panzanella...” Give this a little more space. And lastly, leave the titles up longer at the end so there is enough time to be read. Great work overall!
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