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Honey's Vet Visit

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galaxydreaming

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Date & Time 26 February 2011, 1:27 am

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Allright so this is the next installment for Honey's youtube channel - 1. I've tried to tell the story (off to get vaccinations), explained why there are puppies there too, 2. I've started with the dramatic shot (but wondering if the slow motion puppy sad face should be the right opening shot?) 3. I couldn't think of how to end the video apart from promoting the channel and more vlogs. BTW the vet didn't want to be filmed apart from hands so no shots of her or her POV.

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Comments

galaxydreaming
4:21 am Monday
Feb 28, 2011

Cool thank you, I changed the front scene to include honey in my arms and slowed down the shot also of her snapping at the fingers of the vet. I didn't add narration - I would have but my voice is 'cold' ridden at the moment and sounds like well you know. New version is up on youtube - thanks again you guys - your awesome

jamesERIC
10:47 am Sunday
Feb 27, 2011

Three of thoughts (just re-read this and counted 'em). Good as it is now, I think the impact of the opening clip might be ramped up by starting exactly where Honey goes after the offending fingers. And that maybe in slo-mo. Followed by the scene of the same puppy, placid and secure in (your?) arms it would be powerful. Narrative. I think voice gives a warmer feel to the piece than titles. And I wished I could see more detail inside the carrier box as the tiny ones were being removed: maybe a flashlight put back in there to reflect on the inside ceiling? Just a thought (yesterday I saw Dawn Treader and maybe I have Edmond's torch on my mind still). 1 :

Martell
1:09 pm Saturday
Feb 26, 2011

Good video.. Your opening shot was eye pulling, got me straight into it. 00:29 I like that black and white shot, it worked really well. And you keep honey as the star of the film by only having her on the cam, I wanted to see some face shots tho. The text narration's were fine like how you changed the colours. But I think you could have used some vocal narration's to like at 00:12 you could have used it then and at the ending a mix of the two works really well l.. Hope that was helpful for you, Peace.. 1 :