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Foto Aguita 1920

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nattycuervo

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Date & Time 24 January 2012, 2:14 pm

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El trabajo de un joven bogotano en el Mercado de las Pulgas. Aplica las técnicas del siglo pasado para tomar fotografías en blanco y negro con la cámara de su abuelo.



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lisa Feb 05, 2012, 12:51pm Helpful Not Helpful

This is a lovely little story with really nice visuals and it could be far more compelling with some simple changes. First the introductory graphic is too long, I understand it's stylistic but it needs to be 10 seconds at most, not 20. Secondly the music doesn't work for this story at all and if you're going to use music it needs to fade down after the open so the viewer can hear people's reactions to having their picture taken and hear the photographer better. The music can be faded back up at the end perhaps under a montage of the photographs.

Comments

Jadeph
10:29 am Tuesday
Jan 31, 2012
This is so cool! Very fun to see how the camera affects others. I felt pulled into this piece through the people who were getting their picture taken. I liked the music. The process of the camera and how it works is super interesting. I think the words on the screen need to be larger and more readable. Well done! Joan Helpful Not Helpful
axonuproar
5:08 am Friday
Jan 27, 2012
I liked in this video that although it was about the camera, the focus was on the photographer and the cameras effect on people. Nice. If was only about the camera it would have been boring. Nice work. Nice use of 5 shots. Helpful Not Helpful