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Mackenzie and Millie First Draft

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sweetwig

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Date & Time 12 December 2011, 7:44 am

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This is a video that I am working on for a client at our stables. It is the first draft and I have not shown the client the video yet. Michael, if you see this, could you provide some feedback. I tried to take your advice to get closer shots. The video is a xmas gift to the grandparents. I was going to get the mother to provide some audio but I am wondering if that is required.

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sweetwig
12:13 pm Tuesday
Dec 13, 2011

I did purchase the music I had selected and it is part of my latest. I am doing some colour correcting and adjusting of some of the clips. I have to say, I do not know this person, but the music that Dan Phillipson does is amazing. Perfect for the videos that I work on.

sweetwig
12:06 pm Tuesday
Dec 13, 2011

I am hoping to get audio from the girl and the mother soon. I usually build up the videos with the preview music until I can get acceptance for the piece.

djgregallen
10:43 am Tuesday
Dec 13, 2011

Good use of the 5 shot method. Personally, I think it would be more personal to hear the thoughts of the girl about her horse (what it's like to ride her, how much she loves her, what it takes to take care of her, etc.) Also, there is a weird earmark in the music that keeps repeating "Preview" in it??? Otherwise good camera work...nice quality 1 :