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Nature Inspires

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viviana

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Date & Time 22 January 2012, 8:17 pm

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Yakley is a young Colombian who is dedicated to express their creativity through jewelry

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debbie May 08, 2012, 11:12am

What lovely jewelry. You have some very nice shots of the jewelry-making. The title needs to be up longer. I like the font, but it cuts out way too quickly. 23 seconds in, there’s a cut from a medium/wide shot to a similar shot. A new shot should bring you closer, further away, or show the viewer something new. Michael’s Video Storytelling Basics lessons on The Shot Sequence might be helpful to show you how to go about getting a variety of shots of one action and how to cut it together in an interesting way. Also, if you can, ask a native English speaker to check your subtitles for grammar. Keep shooting, you’re doing well!

Comments

axonuproar
5:26 am Friday
Jan 27, 2012

Great video. I think she would be happy with it. the story is good but I was waiting for something to happen, like seeing the girl put jewelry on someone and the end. Also since you are talking about the colors of the landscape as inspiration for the jewelry, it would be nice to see a couple of shots of the countryside you are talking about.

axonuproar
5:23 am Friday
Jan 27, 2012

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